I can feel you leaving me even when you hold me close
I wonder if I’m being insensitive because I don’t want to let go
Please stay
Even though I know you are hurting badly
*I just can’t…*
I know your time is coming to an end
And every night I go to bed scared that in the morning I will wake up all alone
You tell me “there’s no way out of this one”
But I will suffocate when you are gone
*I just can’t be…*
I want to take you out but you mustn’t be exposed
How can we spend our little forever hiding? I don’t mind as long as it’s with you
And when we tried to kiss I almost got you killed
I now know my tears won’t solve a thing
*I just can’t be with…*
I know you have to go but I want you to stay
Let’s enjoy every moment till you start to decay
I know I am being insensitive, I know you are hurting badly
Because my love is the beginning of death
But my love please stay
*I just can’t be with an Alien (Romantically)*
I need you like a man needs his spine
TGR is an ultra skinny writer who loves to eat and sings in the bathroom. She’s also a lover of dogs and the colour black
35 Comments
beautifully sombre as always. nice piece tiny person
Thank you J
Tiny person,
Aunty TGR you are doing good work…..
First off, I’ve never been called an Aunty so I’m doing my happy dance
And I’m glad you enjoyed the piece
Thank you
Lose your life for love, I know it would kill you if I touched you but please stay…Woww
So the Alien is greedy like this
But it’s deep.
Thank you
Deep. So deep it pierced me. I look forward to seeing more from you my dear. God help us
Thank you m
I’m glad you enjoyed it
Love it, deep but comprehensive.
Thank you Shonathewriter
Lool it’s nice u this dark twisted being
Thank you sewa
Uncle Six says it’s buenos. Dap, T.
Thank you uncle six
“I know you have to go but I want you to stay
Let’s enjoy every moment till you start to decay
I know I am being insensitive, I know you are hurting badly
Because my love is the beginning of death
But my love please stay”
My best stanza!!!
So deep and awesome.
I really appreciate this piece❤
The ultra skinny walking dead writer strikes again
Lol
Thank you John
Comprehensibly deep. Loved this line so much: “Because my love is the beginning of death”. Keep up the good work.
Thank you Itoro
Nice work, I really liked it.
Good stuff….melikes, keep writing
The last stanza tho!
On fleeky! Fleeky!
“Because my love is the beginning of death” sheeesh!
It’s nice, neat, and strikingly sincere. Hauntingly so, even. Good stuff, Tay.
Thank you Ufuoma, Adrain, Warlock and o money
Top notch writing.. Very rare to tap deep into feelings of literary pieces these days.More of the same please.
Thank you Rex
Wow u just blew my mind… Lovely piece.. Keep it up
Thank you Tobj
I just couldn’t help but feel the emotions in every word down to the letter…
It took me while to grasp this one. You designed a quilt of emotions here, and beautifully so TGR.
self reflection….nice piece
I am glad you felt it O
Samu thank you
Timothy thanks alot
When you see a good piece of art, you’re either filled with so much to say or short of words…in this case,it’s the later.
For a moment I thought I had feelings. #Deep