Slow
Music touches me in ways I’m too ashamed to say
Your voice feels like the sea breeze
My heart’s racing but I’m
Slow
Dancing to no music
I’m so weak yet strong
this food tastes so damn good
I am speaking fast but I sound
Slow
Walking on the beach
The moon is creeping on me but I don’t mind
I think the sky is in all shades of colour blind
We’re falling into the water fast but we crash into it
Slow
Motioning you towards me
As we keep chasing waterfalls
Fast tides
Feet slides
And a head collision making me go down
Slow
TGR is an ultra skinny writer who loves to eat and sings in the bathroom. She’s also a lover of dogs and the colour black
13 Comments
Great work! I love the use of words. It’s so beautiful how you pocked the perfect places for the word “slow”
Love it.. Good one
Slow but eventually I got it. Very nice.
nice one
Very nice…. The transitions on point. Perfect placing of “Slow”.
Nice soft piece ….. Would really fit for a song .
Lovely, soft piece …. Sounds really romantic…
Would also fit into a song.
Nice words, beautiful transition….love it
This was all shades of pleasant reading. Most definitely would be awesome in a song; easy listening… each verse having its lilt in “slow” would bring it home, yeah.
I like!
Thanks
I’m glad you enjoyed it ???
Beautiful piece.
I loved it so fast tho i read it so slow
Pure artistry